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Chapter 11: Rumor spread at the speed of light.

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Chapter 11: Rumor spread at the speed of light.

Port City
Port City Arlesha

“Okay, pain, pain, fly away” (Arge)

 

Ten days have passed since I started healing people with recovery magic.

As planned, I was working in front of Felnote-san’s house.

And I must say, the first three days were almost free.
I only got a little money from healing a grandpa and a boy
I’m curing that Grandpa’s back that had been hurt for age and he give me some pocket money

Even though I’m planning to cure that boy’s injury for free but his parents come later and give me some money.
On the fourth day, the number of customers suddenly increased.
Rumors from townspeople and adventures began to spread, such as:

 

『I have an uncurable sickness from a long time ago that all doctor and healer have been given up』

『I had lost an arm from a monster』

 

I was surprised because many serious customers came to see me.

I thought that it would be impossible to re-grow a lost arm or cure a person who was about to die.
But when I tried, I can re-grow any lost body parts and heal any injury.
Recovery magic is convenient, however, it’s impossible to bring the dead back to life.
As it was troublesome to take and count money, I told the townsfolk that 『anything is fine』
Because of that, most of the townspeople have started to look at me like I’m some sort of Goddess.
Some have even started offering me a lot of money

I have become pretty rich. Oops…
When I told Felnote-san about the money I have now, she said 『You’re rich enough to brew your own tea』with a cold face.
When people heard that 『anything is fine』some people went home without paying anything, but I didn’t mind.

Like that, I was able to earn a lot of money enough for me to travel again.
I don’t think I have anywhere to go so I will stay here for a while.
Felnote-san sometimes gives me blood, and this town is quite easy to live.
It’s a nice place to have a nap and it may be good to find someone who is willing to feed me soon.

 

“Yes, I’m done, so you can go kill demons, but please don’t die.” (Arge)

“Oh, thank you very much… Truly a goddess!” (Adventurer A)

“No, I’m not a goddess” (Arge)

 

Although I used my hood to hide my face for a while.
But I would remove it when it got hot and if I used recovery magic at close range,
people could clearly see my face anyway.
It seems like I’ve wasted Zeno’s concern about me to hide my power and face.
But this is bad, not only my face but also my mysterious recovery magic that can recover a severed body part has become well known.
Then more rumors started spreading and recently I was labeled with titles like:

 

『Goddess of the Sea Breeze』

『Silver Angel』

『Genius bishoujo wizard Vampear-chan』

 

Geez, You should properly name me
One of the townsfolk I cured seems to be one of the people who worships me like some sort of Goddess.
He took out some money from his wallet and handed it over to me, saying 『I will come again, goddess!』 and returned home skipping.

No, please don’t worship me.
Didn’t you guys hear me properly?
Since I’ve achieved great success every day, even after he left.
There were still plenty of people queued up and waiting in line.

By the way, I did not tell the town that I’m a vampire
Felnote-san told me to be quiet about that, saying I would stand out too much.
My fangs stick out like a vampire, and my ears are somewhat sharp.
But thanks to my immunity to the sun, it seems that no one thinks that I’m a vampire.

 

“Well… when I cure five more people,
I’ll be finished for today,
so could you guys please prioritize people with serious injuries?” (Arge)

 

Even though I said that I was done today,
it wasn’t because my magical power was exhausted.
I said it simply because I was tired, and wanted to take a nap.
I would like to stop working right now, but I can’t say my real intentions.

Besides, it’s better to earn money when I still can.
This way, when the time comes, I can have an easier time finding someone that would be willing to feed me
And I heal five more people today works as a compromise.
Since everyone will be saved if they obediently listen, and because I can rest when I want to take a break, it’s easy an easy work environment.
There are people who complain from time to time, but the amount of violence is small
Because those people would immediately be beaten up by the other people waiting in line.

I cured the five people and returned to Felnote-san’s house.
Her house is two stories and quite wide
It seems that Felnote-san bought it with the money she earned in the past.
The cause of her blindness was due to a fight against monsters.
With most of her skills are are battle oriented.
So she probably made a living as a monster hunter in the past.

If I want to confirm it, I could just use Blood Reading to verify, but I am not interested.
Walking through the corridor and going into the kitchen,
Felnote-san was sitting in a chair.
Because there’s a tea set on the table, is it tea time?

 

“I’m back, Felnote-san… Felnote-san?” (Arge)

 

When I tried speaking to her, I didn’t receive a reply.
When I thought about how strange it was, I noticed Felnote-san’s eyelids were falling down.
I heard her gently breathing and the big breasts make a ‘Boin’ due to my first impression of her shake slightly in accordance with her breathing.

Is she taking a nap?
It’s quite comfortable to sleep while sitting. I understand that feeling.
There is a sense of security that’s different from the bed,
which would make you start to feel like sleeping as soon as you sit down.

 

“… It’s bad to wake her up, isn’t it?” (Arge)

 

Felnote-san may be tired because she’s busy every day, and moves around a lot.
I don’t know what she’s doing, but she wasn’t able to see with her eyes for a while.
It seems to be something that she became able to be done again because she got her sight back, and those things just came back with it.

I like taking naps, rather you can say I love them.
I know exactly how happy I feel when I take a nap.
This means that you shouldn’t do anything that will take happiness away from others.
…Anyway, it’s around the time to prepare a meal.
Felnote-san makes my meals every day.
Although it is dependent on the menu, the preparations for the meal should have already started…

 

“…It can’t be helped” (Arge)

 

When I see Felnote-san sleeping comfortably, I feel that way.
Although I am paying money, she makes delicious meal everyday, so let’s give her some rest.

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  1. “People’s rumors are light speed spread”
    can it be ” People’s rumors spread at light speed” “People’s rumors spread light speed” something like that, lol.

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  5. Thank you for translating this novel.
    Your grammar is a bit off but it’s readable, it’s not too bad, i’ve read way worse machine translations; good luck with this.

    Also i’d like to suggest you to use normal characters for the chapter, not bold, it would be more pleasing to the eye (you can use italics for the notes), but i guess it’s up to personal preference I don’t really mind if you want to keep it this way.

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  7. “Hai, pain pain go away” you can use ok to translate “hai”, it woudn’t sound wired like “yes” in this context (it’s fine to keep it in japanese too)

    “By the way, I do not tell people in town that I am a vampire.” change “I do not” to “I did not”

    “so would you please take serious people’s priority?” should be “so could you give priority to people with serious injuries/in serious conditions”

    “so let’s her rest today” should be “let’s let her rest today”

    Also you could translate Ferunotto to Felnott maybe? (I don’t really know japanese, I’m just going by sound)

    Xeno was previously as Zeno

    Finally you should use only tree dots, not six (“…” not “……”)

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    • how i see it “let’s let” is probably wrong, it become “let us let her rest today” when she’s speaking in singular it should probably just be “i’ll let her rest today”.

      also while “let’s let” is technically correct it’s still horrible English there are a sea of synonyms to use to avoid doubling a word like that, like “let’s give her some rest today” or “let’s concede her a rest today” although the later one is not recommended due to the fact concede is not used much by “netizens” and keeping it simple can help.

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      • “Let’s” and “let us” don’t always have the same meaning (example: let’s go and let us go); also when talking to yourself, you can use “let’s” for “I’ll”, it is wrong but it’s used colloquially i think.

        I do agree that “let’s let” sounds bad (I didn’t notice a first) so it’s probably better to change it to “I’ll let” or something.

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  16. Ten days (has?)[I feel that there must be something here but i’m not sure if it’s has] passed since I started healing people with recovery magic.
    I got a little money from heal(ing) a grandpa who hurt his back
    It became (a) rumor,
    It’s impossible to make the dead come “true?” (back to life?) as expected.
    most people will look (at) me like look(ing) at (a) God and some (will) offer lot(‘s) of money. or offer a lot of money.
    I have become pretty (quite? seems easier to read.) rich. Oops… When I tell Ferunoto-san about money now, she said I am rich enough to brew tea. That was cold. Her face (that is).
    but I do not have to go. (clarification please? does she mean she doesn’t have to go or she doesn’t have anywhere to go?)
    It is nice to have a nap and it may be good to find someone who (is) willing to feed me here all the time.
    It seems like I’ve wasted Xeno’s concern about me to keep (it a) secret. what is? her face? i forgot it’s been so long since i read the previous chapters… maybe i’ll reread later
    But this is bad, not only my face, but also (the) mysterious recovery magic (that) can “recover” the arm got well known. i can’t really add since i can’t read the raws… but if possible”” can “recover” “a severed” arm got well known
    (she) says that I will be stand out. this one can be left as is
    Even though I said to end it, not because “the”(my) magical power is exhausted. “Just simple say it” (feels weird but don’t know where) because I (am) tired and wanted to take a nap.
    I would like to stop working right now, “when I say real intention,” feels… meh can’t help 😀 leave as is then
    but she has not seen her eyes for a while > but she was not able to see for a while
    It seems that something that came to be able to be done because it became visible and things that she had to do had come out. ” i want to read the next chaper to please just recheck these 😀 nyaaaa~)

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    • Thank you very much.
      Wow, so much to fix and I wonder how I can make those silly mistake.
      Fixed.
      “I maybe clumsy imouto but please take good care of me from not on”.

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    • Am I doing this right?
      Chapter 11: People’s rumors spread with light speed
      “Okay, pain pain fly away”
      Ten days has passed since I started healing people with recovery magic. As usual, I’m working in front of Ferunoto-san’s house.
      I must say that the first 3 days was almost free.
      I got a little money from healing a grandpa who hurt his back and a boy who fell and bruised himself. His parents bothered to come and pay later even though I was going to cure child’s injury for free.
      From the fourth day, the number of customers suddenly increased. It became a rumor, “It was a long time ago that doctor or a wizard already gave up with this sickness” and “I had lost an arm from a monster” , I was surprised because many serious customers came.
      I thought that it would be impossible for a lost arm to grow or cure a person who was about to die at once, but when I tried his arm grew and his illness cured. Recovery magic is convenient, however it’s impossible to bring the dead back to life as expected.
      Because It was troublesome to take and count money I told the townsfolk that “anything is fine”, most people looked at me like looking at a God and some offered a lot of money; I have become pretty rich. Oops… When I told Ferunoto-san about the money I have now, she said “You’re rich enough to brew tea.” That was cold, her face that is. (She tease our MC, I guess)
      Of course when people heard that “anything is fine”, some people went home without paying anything, but I didn’t mind it.
      Like that, I was able to earn a lot of money so I can travel again; but I don’t think I have to go anywhere so I will stay here for a while.
      Ferunoto-san sometimes gives me blood and this town is quite easy for me. It’s nice place to have a nap and it may be good to find someone who is willing to feed me all the time.
      “Yes, I’m done so you can go kill demons, but please don’t die.”
      “Oh, thank you very much… Truly a goddess!”
      “No, I’m not a goddess”
      Although I used the hood to cover my face for a while, I would remove it when it got hot and if I used recovery magic at close range, you could clearly see my face. It seems like I’ve wasted Xeno’s concern about me to keep it a secret. (her face and her power, her face because a certain womanizer will want to marry her and her power because the country will not leave her alone). But this is bad, not only my face, but also the mysterious recovery magic that can recover a severed arm is well known.
      Then rumors are spreading and recently I was labeled with titles like: “Goddess of the Sea Breeze” “Silver Angel”, “Genius bishoujo wizard Vampear-chan”. You should properly name me. (I use “Vampear” because people saying of her name not her race, and our MC complains that those names don’t reflect her directly, they just idolize her)
      One of the townsfolk I cured seem to be one of people who worship me as he likes. He took out some money from his wallet and handed it over to me, saying “I will come again, goddess!” and returned home with a skip. No, as much as possible, please don’t worship me. Did you guys hear me properly?
      I achieve great success every day since even after he left, there were still many people queued up and waiting.
      By the way, I did not tell the people in town that I am a vampire. Ferunoto-san told me to stay silent, she says that I would be stand out .
      My fangs are growing like a vampire and my ears are somewhat sharp, but thanks to my immunity to the sun, it seems that no one thinks that I’m a vampire.
      “Well … … when I cure five more people, I will finish today, so could you give priority to people with serious injuries?”

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      • wait, only half of chapter ?
        Uhm… excuse me, is later half already okay ?
        or comment have a limited word that you can copy your whole edit text ?
        or you make a mistake when copy ?
        Anyway, please give me a reply when you read the chapter again. I already edited it like you suggest.

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      • (Yes, it’s me AiZon) I only edited half the chapter to test out if what I was doing was right. Since I got the OK here’s the rest but please note that the last 3-4 sentences haven’t been edited.

        Chapter 11: People’s rumors spread with light speed
        “Okay, pain pain fly away”
        Ten days has passed since I started healing people with recovery magic. As usual, I’m working in front of Ferunoto-san’s house.
        I must say that the first 3 days was almost free.
        I got a little money from healing a grandpa who hurt his back and a boy who fell and bruised himself. His parents bothered to come and pay later even though I was going to cure the child’s injury for free.
        From the fourth day, the number of customers suddenly increased. It became rumors from the townspeople and adventures like: “The doctors and wizards I consulted already gave up with this sickness a long time ago.” and “I had lost an arm from a monster”, I was surprised because many serious customers came.
        I thought that it would be impossible for a lost arm to grow or cure a person who was about to die at once but when I tried; an adventurer’s arm grew back and a citizen’s chronic illness was cured. Recovery magic is convenient, however it’s impossible to bring the dead back to life as expected.
        Because It was troublesome to take and count money I told the townsfolk that “anything is fine”, most people looked at me like looking at a God and some offered a lot of money; I have become pretty rich. Oops… When I told Ferunoto-san about the money I have now, she said “You’re rich enough to brew your own tea.” That was cold, her face that is. (TL: She’s teasing our MC, I guess)
        Of course when people heard that “anything is fine”, some people went home without paying anything, but I didn’t mind it.
        Like that, I was able to earn a lot of money, making it so I can travel again; but I don’t think I have to go anywhere so I will stay here for a while.
        Ferunoto-san sometimes gives me blood and this town is quite easy for me. It’s nice place to have a nap and it may be good to find someone who is willing to feed me all the time.
        “Yes, I’m done so you can go kill demons, but please don’t die.”
        “Oh, thank you very much… Truly a goddess!”
        “No, I’m not a goddess”
        Although I used the hood to cover my face for a while, I would remove it when it got hot and if I used recovery magic at close range, you could clearly see my face. It seems like I’ve wasted Xeno’s concern about me to keep it a secret. (her face and her power, her face because a certain womanizer will want to marry her and her power because the country will not leave her alone). But this is bad, not only my face, but also the mysterious recovery magic that can recover a severed arm was well known.
        Then more rumors started spreading and recently I was labeled with titles like: “Goddess of the Sea Breeze” “Silver Angel”, “Genius bishoujo wizard Vampear-chan”. You should properly name me. (TL: I use “Vampear” because people are calling her name and not her race. Meanwhile our MC is complaining that those names don’t reflect her directly, they just idolize her)
        One of the townsfolk I cured seem to be one of people who worships me as he likes. He took out some money from his wallet and handed it over to me, saying “I will come again, goddess!” and returned home with a skip. No, as much as possible, please don’t worship me. Did you guys hear me properly?
        I achieve great success every day since even after he left, there were still many people queued up and waiting.
        By the way, I did not tell the people in town that I’m a vampire. Ferunoto-san told me to stay silent, saying I would stand out too much.
        My fangs are growing like a vampire and my ears are somewhat sharp, but thanks to my immunity to the sun, it seems that no one thinks that I’m a vampire.
        “Well … … when I cure five more people, I will be finished for today, so could you guys please give priority to people with serious injuries?”
        Even though I said I was done today, it wasn’t because my magical power was exhausted. I said it simply because I was tired and wanted to take a nap.
        I would like to stop working right now but I can’t say my real intentions. Besides it’s better to earn more money than my host. This makes it so when the time comes I can have an easier time finding someone that would be willing to feed me. There are five more people today as a compromise.
        At such times, everyone will be saved as they will obediently listen; and because I can rest when I want to take a break, it’s easy an easy work environment.
        There are people who complain from time to time but the amount of violence is small; because those people would immediately be beaten up by the other people waiting in line.
        I cured the five people and returned to Ferunoto-san’s house.
        Her house is two stories and quite wide. It seems that Ferunoto-san bought it with the money she earned in the past. The cause of her blindness was due to a fight against monsters and her skills is are battle oriented. So she probably made a living as a monster hunter in the past.
        If I thought about confirming it, I could just use Blood Reading to verify, but I am not interested.
        Walking through the corridor and going into the kitchen, Ferunoto-san was sitting in a chair. Because there’s a tea set on the table, is it tea time?
        “I’m back, Ferunoto-san… Ferunoto-san?”
        When I tried speaking to her, I didn’t receive a reply. When I thought about how strange it was strange, I noticed Ferunoto-san’s eyelids were falling down.
        I heard her gently breathing and the big breasts called “Boin” due to my first impression of her shake slightly in accordance with her breathing.
        Are you taking a nap?
        It’s quite comfortable to sleep while sitting. I understand that feeling.
        There is a sense of security that’s different from the bed, you would start to feel like sleeping in a short time. I feel a bit relieved.
        “… It’s bad to wake her up, isn’t it?”
        Ferunoto-san may be tired because she’s busy everyday and moves around a lot.
        I don’t know what she was doing, but she wasn’t able to see with her eyes for a while. It seems to be something that she became able to be done again because she got her sight back and those things just came back with it.
        I like taking a nap rather you can say I love it.
        I know exactly how happy I feel when I take a nap. This means that you shouldn’t do anything that will take happiness away from others.
        …Anyway, it’s around the time to prepare a meal.
        Ferunoto-san makes my meals everyday. Although it is dependent on the menu, it is about time that it is not strange even if the preparation is already in progress anytime … ….
        “…It can’t be helped”
        When I see Ferunoto sleeping comfortably, I feel that way.
        Although I am paying money, she makes delicious rice everyday, so let’s give her some rest today.

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    • Please at least read until chapter 18 to see what kind of person she really is before saying that.
      And I recommend chapter 21 that was her TREGADY flashback childhood dream. Explain why she turn out this way.

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      • Err… you mean her tragedy as a boy before reincarnated or after reincarnated? Is Vampire in this novel really reincarnated as a baby but skipped the childhood time or did they just reincarnated to teenager vampires?

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  20. I’m confused, it looks like AiZon edited this quite well, but it looks like your main post is a mashed together version with a bunch of parts summarized or missing.

    Though if I could make a suggestion, maybe change the chapter title to: “Rumor spread at the speed of light.”

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    • Well, I’m really bad at English.
      When I read what Machine Translate give me, I feel it was wrong but I don’t know suit-able word to replace it.
      Thank you very much for your suggestion.

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    • P.s. A quick break up and smoothing of AiZon’s version.

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      Chapter 11: Rumor spread at the speed of light.

      “Okay, pain pain fly away”

      Ten days has passed since I started healing people with recovery magic. As planned, I’m working in front of Ferunoto-san’s house.

      I must say, the first 3 days were almost free.

      At most, I got a little money from healing a grandpa who hurt his back and a boy who fell and bruised himself; Grandpa give me some pocket money, and the boys parents bothered to come and pay later even though I was going to cure the child’s injury for free.

      From the fourth day, the number of customers suddenly increased. Rumors from townspeople and adventures began to spread, such as: ‘The doctors and wizards I consulted already gave up with this sickness a long time ago.’ and ‘I had lost an arm from a monster’, I was surprised because many serious customers came to see me.

      I thought that it would be impossible to re-grow a lost arm, or cure a person who was about to die, but when I tried; an adventurer’s arm grew back and a citizen’s chronic illness was cured. Recovery magic is convenient, however it’s impossible to bring the dead back to life, as expected.

      As It was troublesome to take and count money, I told the townsfolk that ‘anything is fine’, because of that, most of the townspeople have started looked at me like some sort of Goddess. Some have even started offering me a lot of money; I have become pretty rich. Oops…

      When I told Ferunoto-san about the money I have now, she said ‘You’re rich enough to brew your own tea.’ with a cold face. (TL: She’s teasing our MC, I guess)

      Of course when people heard that ‘anything is fine’, some people went home without paying anything, but I didn’t mind.

      Like that, I was able to earn a lot of money, making it so I can travel again; but I don’t think I have to go anywhere so I will stay here for a while.

      Ferunoto-san sometimes gives me blood and this town is quite easy for me. It’s nice place to have a nap and it may be good to find someone who is willing to feed me all the time.

      “Yes, I’m done, so you can go kill demons, but please don’t die.”

      “Oh, thank you very much… Truly a goddess!”

      “No, I’m not a goddess”

      Although I used my hood to cover my face for a while, I would remove it when it got hot and if I used recovery magic at close range, you could clearly see my face anyway. It seems like I’ve wasted Xeno’s concern about me to keep it a secret. (her face and her power, her face because a certain womanizer will want to marry her and her power because the country will not leave her alone).

      But this is bad, not only my face, but also my mysterious recovery magic that can recover a severed arm has become well known.

      Then more rumors started spreading and recently I was labeled with titles like:
      “Goddess of the Sea Breeze”

      “Silver Angel”

      “Genius bishoujo wizard Vampear-chan”

      You should properly name me. (TL: I use “Vampear” because people are calling her name and not her race. Meanwhile our MC is complaining that those names don’t reflect her directly, they just idolize her)

      One of the townsfolk I cured seem to be one of people who worships me as he likes. He took out some money from his wallet and handed it over to me, saying ‘I will come again, goddess!’ and returned home skipping. No, please don’t worship me. Didn’t you guys hear me properly?

      I achieve great success every day, even after he left. There were still plenty of people queued up and waiting in line.
      By the way, I did not tell the town that I’m a vampire; Ferunoto-san told me to be quiet about that, saying I would stand out too much.

      My fangs stick out like a vampire, and my ears are somewhat sharp. But thanks to my immunity to the sun, it seems that no one thinks that I’m a vampire.

      “Well… when I cure five more people, I’ll be finished for today, so could you guys please prioritize people with serious injuries?”

      Even though I said that I was done today, it wasn’t because my magical power was exhausted. I said it simply because I was tired and wanted to take a nap.

      I would like to stop working right now, but I can’t say my real intentions. Besides, it’s better to earn more money than my host. This way, when the time comes, I can have an easier time finding someone that would be willing to feed me; so five more people today works as a compromise. Since everyone will be saved if they obediently listen, and because I can rest when I want to take a break, it’s easy an easy work environment.

      There are people who complain from time to time, but the amount of violence is small; because those people would immediately be beaten up by the other people waiting in line.

      I cured the five people and returned to Ferunoto-san’s house.

      Her house is two stories and quite wide; It seems that Ferunoto-san bought it with the money she earned in the past. The cause of her blindness was due to a fight against monsters, and her skills is are battle oriented. So she probably made a living as a monster hunter in the past. If I thought about confirming it, I could just use Blood Reading to verify, but I am not interested.

      Walking through the corridor and going into the kitchen, Ferunoto-san was sitting in a chair. Because there’s a tea set on the table, is it tea time?

      “I’m back, Ferunoto-san… Ferunoto-san?”

      When I tried speaking to her, I didn’t receive a reply. When I thought about how strange it was, I noticed Ferunoto-san’s eyelids were falling down. I heard her gently breathing and the big breasts make a ‘Boin’ due to my first impression of her shake slightly in accordance with her breathing.

      Are you taking a nap?

      It’s quite comfortable to sleep while sitting. I understand that feeling.

      There is a sense of security that’s different from the bed, which would make start to feel like sleeping as soon as you sit down. I feel a bit relieved.

      “… It’s bad to wake her up, isn’t it?”

      Ferunoto-san may be tired because she’s busy everyday, and moves around a lot.

      I don’t know what she’s doing, but she wasn’t able to see with her eyes for a while. It seems to be something that she became able to be done again because she got her sight back and those things just came back with it.

      I like taking a nap rather you can say I love it.

      I know exactly how happy I feel when I take a nap. This means that you shouldn’t do anything that will take happiness away from others.

      …Anyway, it’s around the time to prepare a meal.

      Ferunoto-san makes my meals everyday. Although it is dependent on the menu, it is about time that it is not strange even if the preparation is already in progress anytime…

      “…It can’t be helped”

      When I see Ferunoto sleeping comfortably, I feel that way.

      Although I am paying money, she makes delicious rice everyday, so let’s give her some rest.

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      • Errors I spotted after posting, sorry, I’m a bit tired, so I messed up a lot more:

        3 days were almost free. -> three days were almost free.

        his back and a boy who -> his back, and a boy who

        bothered to come and pay later even though -> bothered to come, and pay later, even though

        As It was troublesome -> As it was troublesome

        started looked at me like -> started to look at me like

        like some sort of -> like I’m some sort of

        I don’t think I have to go anywhere so I will stay -> I don’t think I have anywhere to go, so I will stay

        gives me blood and this town is quite easy -> gives me blood, and this town is quite easy

        One of the townsfolk I cured seem to be one of people who worships me as he likes -> One of the townsfolk I cured seem to be one of people who worships me like some sort of Goddess.

        I achieve great success every day, even after he left. -> Since I’ve achieve great success every day, even after he left.

        because I was tired and wanted to -> because I was tired, and wanted to

        which would make start to feel like sleeping -> which would make you start to feel like sleeping

        able to be done again because she got her sight back and those things just came back with it. -> able to be do again because she got her sight back, and those things just came back with it.

        I like taking a nap rather you can say I love it. -> I like taking naps, rather you can say I love them.

        Ferunoto-san makes my meals everyday. Although -> Ferunoto-san makes my meals everyday; Although

        Although it is dependent on the menu, it is about time that it is not strange even if the preparation is already in progress anytime… -> Although it is dependent on the menu, the preparations for the meal should have already started…

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        I’d try editing chapter 14 tomorrow.

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      • Ignore: able to be done again because she got her sight back and those things just came back with it. -> able to be do again because she got her sight back, and those things just came back with it.

        Pay attention to: able to be done again because she got her sight back and those things just came back with it. -> able to be done again because she got her sight back, and those things just came back with it.

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