Kaoru giving solid advice, although common sense in our world even if rarely followed as short term gains are in general better than long term plans for business as a plan that effects 2 years is pointless if you out of business in the following year becase you didn’t have enough funds to cover an unforseen loss. Which leads to the more aggressive actions by companies to sell more. But what do I know I’m just a high school senior.
In business, you take a loan(short term) to develop more services and products(long term) to expand your operations. So Kaoru’s advice isn’t that abnormal in ether worlds, but in her world, there aren’t things like bonds or stock for short-term cash flow so it’s more dangerous to invest in your business.
P10 & P12
Talking -> Taking
P13
Wouldnt it be if -> Wouldnt it be better if |||||| and remove the “instead”
p14
that that -> that they
p16
threathen -> threats
such of -> such kind of
Suggestion:
Page 12 (not corrected yet add a little here)
Ah when the dining hall stopped {talking order}->{taking orders}, the waitress will have less works
Page 13 (not corrected yet)
Wouldn’t it be {}->{better} if only i took care of many other customers that didn’t complain {instead}->{}.
Page 14 (not corrected yet add a little hereq)
{People}->{peoples} who don’t complain to you doesn’t mean that {that}->{they} don’t have any conplaints
Page 16 (not corrected yet)
But if the shop gave them money with their {threatens}->{threats}, other rogues in the country
Such {}->{kind} of peoples must be crushed
[Other than thedefend already point out nothing wrong]
Thank you for the chapter!
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Wow, thanks for the chapter.
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Kaoru giving solid advice, although common sense in our world even if rarely followed as short term gains are in general better than long term plans for business as a plan that effects 2 years is pointless if you out of business in the following year becase you didn’t have enough funds to cover an unforseen loss. Which leads to the more aggressive actions by companies to sell more. But what do I know I’m just a high school senior.
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In business, you take a loan(short term) to develop more services and products(long term) to expand your operations. So Kaoru’s advice isn’t that abnormal in ether worlds, but in her world, there aren’t things like bonds or stock for short-term cash flow so it’s more dangerous to invest in your business.
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P10 & P12
Talking -> Taking
P13
Wouldnt it be if -> Wouldnt it be better if |||||| and remove the “instead”
p14
that that -> that they
p16
threathen -> threats
such of -> such kind of
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Suggestion:
Page 12 (not corrected yet add a little here)
Ah when the dining hall stopped {talking order}->{taking orders}, the waitress will have less works
Page 13 (not corrected yet)
Wouldn’t it be {}->{better} if only i took care of many other customers that didn’t complain {instead}->{}.
Page 14 (not corrected yet add a little hereq)
{People}->{peoples} who don’t complain to you doesn’t mean that {that}->{they} don’t have any conplaints
Page 16 (not corrected yet)
But if the shop gave them money with their {threatens}->{threats}, other rogues in the country
Such {}->{kind} of peoples must be crushed
[Other than thedefend already point out nothing wrong]
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Page 10:
I guess it’s about time the shop stops {talking}->{taking} orders
[Once again this is thedefend already point out, I just complete the sentence to make it easy to find]
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thx Kaoru
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