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1. First??

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2. It is great nothing wrong

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   • It is really konosuba, Explosion!!!.
     Now the combatant no 6 is really an idiot to shout it out loud.

     He resemble to Kazuma, also evil but limit only to pranks.

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3. At page 22
   Oo **** **** matsuri !!!
   Female will blush and hesitate to call the rain but not with perverted men.
   He done the pranks but get the psychological counter attack by himself instead.

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   • Oo Ch*nko Matsuri~

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     • I read the japanese wors on page 22 and it is o ch*n ch*n matsuri

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4. How about using “Trash” or “Scum” instead of “Low Human”?

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   • Kisama is usually translated as bastard, or the like.

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     • I know, but I don’t really like “strong” words. I somewhat feel unpleasant when hear/talk/write that “strong” words.

       And it didn’t have to be fixed translated at that.
       I’d like to use “scoundrel” or “Rascal” with a little lighter meaning.
       “Trash” and “Scum” are somewhat lighter meaning too.

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   • Trashzuma and Scumzuma?

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5. Lol mc played her like a fiddle

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   • Kisama is usually translated as bastard, or the like.

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6. HAHAHA that blind by greed phrase! XD

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7. This mantra is awesome if used by females. +100 points if beautiful.
   -1000 points if used by males. +mental break if brawny.
   Causes confusion if traps.
   And thanks for the chapter.

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8. Thank you for the chapter!

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9. The title translation is weird, it sounds like G**gle Translate.

   戦闘員 (Sentouin) = combatant, but the meaning in this context is evil soldier. Compare page 3 and 4 to Shocker Sentouin from Kamen Rider http://kamenrider.wikia.com/wiki/Shocker_Combatmen . The connotation of “combatant” in English is “non-professional” or “guerilla” but not “evil” as the Japanese word. An evil soldier is a “henchman” or a “minion” (but minions are the stupid yellow things, I hate them)

   派遣します (haken-shimasu) = they are dispatched, meaning “they go on a mission”. But the English word “dispatch” can mean “they go on a mission” OR “they are killed”. A clearer word for “(soldiers) go on a mission” is “deploy” or “move out”.

   After trying different words for “evil soldier” and “go on a mission”, the combination I liked most was “Henchmen, Moving Out!”

   Unless the English name “Combatants Will Be Dispatched!” was given by the original author Akatsuki-san, please consider changing it to “Henchmen, Moving Out!”

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   • Thank you very much.
     Actually, I’m not that good at English, so I just literal translate, rather than choose a local / suitable translation.

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   • But Fix all the words combatant to henchmen now will be hard.
     There are like 70 pages to check and fix with photoshop, re-upload, etc.

     So I will change from later chapter instead.

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10. looks like “Champion Scans” is doing this one as well.

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11. So with this project got poached by yuns and champion, how is it gonna go? Dropped?

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    • Well, they are better than me on everything (Translator, Editor, Cleanse, Typeset), so I will drop.

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12. I lough alot ^^

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