Grammar notes:
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Well {}→{if} they are facing hardship
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The power of {}->{the} DVD
Clippy notes: There are a bunch of things called DVD’s. A/The is need to specify if it a particular one or in general. The is used here because it make The DVD sound more grand
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People seem to be {panic} → {panicking}
Clippy notes: Panic is a state you are in, panicking is something you do
Localization notes:
Page 1:
{rescues}→{rescued} the village girl
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however she {} →{has} caused no harm to
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More than that the {neighbor} → {neighboring}
Page 6:
I didn’t make much profit with {}→{the}
Page 7
The also received {“tip”} → {tips}
Page 8:
I only received it as requested
No sure what she means here
thanks fer the chap
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Thanks for the Chapter!
Happy new year!
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little suggestion: (happy new year 2019)
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and {thank}->{thanks to} her, we {destroy}->{destroyed} the kidnapping organization
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Happy new year, loli o mamoritai. Thx for all your novel and manga translation. I hope you doing your best in this hobby, real life and your job XD
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Thx for de chap!
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Your profile pic is from clockwork planet, right?
Correct me if I’m wrong.
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Yep
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I love that series so much!!
Both the manga and novel!
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Naoto, right?
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Ah the sudden insanity will soon begin.
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Thanks for the chapter and Happy New Year everyone ^^.
Btw Sabine evacuate to Japan ? Would be funny xD
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Happy New Year!
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Grammar notes:
Page 6:
Well {}→{if} they are facing hardship
Page 8:
The power of {}->{the} DVD
Clippy notes: There are a bunch of things called DVD’s. A/The is need to specify if it a particular one or in general. The is used here because it make The DVD sound more grand
Page 10:
People seem to be {panic} → {panicking}
Clippy notes: Panic is a state you are in, panicking is something you do
Localization notes:
Page 1:
{rescues}→{rescued} the village girl
Page 4:
however she {} →{has} caused no harm to
Page 5:
More than that the {neighbor} → {neighboring}
Page 6:
I didn’t make much profit with {}→{the}
Page 7
The also received {“tip”} → {tips}
Page 8:
I only received it as requested
No sure what she means here
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Page 8: Mitsuha means like “If Sabine wants to have it, she must put out a request => Mitsuha can get the money from the king”
If Mitsuha gives the clothes to Sabine with no request, she can’t get the money from the King.
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It’s not a cliffhanger if you read the WN though.
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