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Mitsuha Manga Chapter 28: And then, it’s war
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Mitsuha Manga Chapter 28: And then, it’s war
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Thanks for the chapter!
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I love your TL work and decided I wanted to help. I also included some notes about why the grammar is wrong for future reference, if you want me to drop it please tell me.
Grammar notes
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I don’t want to take refuge {at -> in} another country
Clippy notes: At implies present tense (the action is in the present) In has no defined tense.
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My shop will become a {suicidal -> suicide} bomb
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Teleport to an {unmanned zone -> uninhabited region}
Clippy notes: Manned means that active work is being done for something. Uninhabited means that there is no one there. A car with only someone in the back seat is unmanned but not uninhabited.
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There {is -> are} not {customer -> customers}
Clippy notes: A lack of something is always spoken in plural
The news about the was {is -> has} already spread
Clippy notes: Is is current tense, has is bast tense.
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A number of nobles who {has -> have} the territory
Clippy notes: Has is past tense, have is present
Has advanced in {a-> } little time.
Clippy notes: This is not a strict grammar error, but measurements usually don’t have articles like A and The
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Facing the {lord -> lord’s} army
Clippy notes: The lord owns the army so the ‘s is required
Why {are -> do} the monsters, {which -> who} can’t be communicated with, {are joining -> have joined}
Clippy notes: Can’t quite explain what is wrong here in the first part, minor tense issues in the second part
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No you can’t hug me, even {->if} we are out in public
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{As the → for} information gathering and {->to act as [a/the]} liaison
Clippy notes: Information gathering is an activity and should not have A or The attached to it
Localization notes:
Feel free to ignore these, these are changes that I think would make the work read better but are still grammatically correct statements on their own. These are soley my opinion.
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and I {got->received} some shocking information
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I have sent {words -> messages} to various places
{I completely don’t understand} -> {I dont understand at all}
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Isn’t this {chess → check} mate
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Alright, I {-> have} decided
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Has given {the order -> orders} to let you pass
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I {come -> came} to report
Finally because I am the worst sort of person:
The draft without {edit -> editing}, proof {read -> reading} or quality {check -> checking}
Until it {get -> gets} fixed by the kind soul reader who {-> is} willing to help me to fix it.
For {god -> god’s} sake
There is a few tense issues, but you are getting way better
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Thank you very much.
May I count on you for proof-read (grammar check) from now on.
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To tell the truth, people have always demanded Local English, but I have no idea how to do it.
The best I can do learn from my grammar mistakes, that Sir Guest_Edit pointed out for me.
If you could help me fix the grammar to Local English, I might gradually get used to it and improve my English Ability.
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I will try to help with this. Although I don’t think I will be able to provide much explanation of why localization changes are useful
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Thx
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suggestion:
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when worse comes to worst, my shop will be a “{suicidal}->{suicide} bomb” (just be consistent)
“suicide bomb” what…
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even {}->{though} i said suicide bomb, i didn’t plan to commit suicide.
page 17:
no, you can’t hug me even {}->{if} we aren’t in the public.
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thanks to psychic programmer to point out more than what i can give.
my comment are just late.
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thanks to psychic programmer to point out more than what i can give.
my comment are just late.
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Thx!
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Second pass
Grammar notes:
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slower than {The}->{A} coach
Clippy notes: Comparing to an abstract coach note a specific one
There are some other (very minor) localisation issues, but it would require a better writer than me and a bunch of work to fix them, sorry.
Other that that its good.
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Thank you very much.
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Thank fot the chapter and happy new year everyone (again) ^^
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