thank you for the chapter. 🙂
it’s just so good that I went ahead and read to novel, so the cliffhanger now is less hard then yesterday.
btw, the next button linked to chapter 24.
It’s actually a psychological phenomenon. She have been living in a world where getting hurt is super rare. So she actually doesn’t concerned that much about getting hurt. Especially by an arrow.
Well. She will be appearing as a shrine maiden. So she is wearing something nice and beautiful to stand out. Plus, with her hand like that, i dont think she can wear the traditional miko like dress.
More localization notes:
Page 3:
remember it, it {starts}→{has started} to hurt again
Page 4:
{I will call for} → {I’ll get} the doctor
his body to protect {}→{the} young
That he let {1}→{a} bolt
Clippy notes: single digit numbers look odd in text, stick to word versions. A/The is also a preferable substitute for “one”.
{I will save that for later}-{We can ignore that for now}
Page 5:
you {didn’t get any}→{haven’t got a} big job
What I don’t understand is why no one comment about the Captain’s total lack of reaction towards teleportation/monsters/otherworlders even if it happened in front of his eyes.
Well , I ,in fact , didn’t read the novel , but hey , we are so used to not mind the destruction of common sense on this site ( I mean to say : mile , kaoru ,… ) so I actually just didn’t notice getting someone APPEAR in front of me and TELEPORT me in another world as something a little bit out of “common sense” xD
Official English out now, you still continuing this? The novel will be lot different between web and LN version, but the manga I think have exactly same contents.
thanks
hey, been a while since i last commented( i still check your site regularly tho).
many thanks for the updates.
still waiting for you generous update for this novel.
Thanks for the chapter
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thank you for the chapter. 🙂
it’s just so good that I went ahead and read to novel, so the cliffhanger now is less hard then yesterday.
btw, the next button linked to chapter 24.
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Yup yus where it was itching… pls keep on scraching thank you very much 😄
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i wonder if mitsuha’s speech of war is in the next chapter. thanks fer the chap
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Thanks for the chapter , you are doing an amazing work xD
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Thank you for the chapter!
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Boi look like thing is about to go down!
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Waar!
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suggestion:
page 3:
the {ball}->{balls}!, the balls are {hitting}->{pressing under me/pushing underneath}!
now that i {remember}->{have remembered it}, it starts to hurt again!
page 6:
our {enemy is}->{enemies are} about 20,000 in number
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Very few errors this time, nice!
Grammar notes:
Page 2:
Private mercenary team {}→{:} Wolf Fang
Page 7:
In some {case}->{cases}
Localization notes
Page 2:
The {destination of teleport} → {teleport’s destination} is the {base of the mercenaries} → {mercenaries’ base}
Also our protag is surprisingly resistant to pain. Not even caring there is an arrow in her.
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It’s actually a psychological phenomenon. She have been living in a world where getting hurt is super rare. So she actually doesn’t concerned that much about getting hurt. Especially by an arrow.
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It’s called adrenalin rush.
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Why a dress though 🤔
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Well. She will be appearing as a shrine maiden. So she is wearing something nice and beautiful to stand out. Plus, with her hand like that, i dont think she can wear the traditional miko like dress.
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Thank you for the chapter.
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More localization notes:
Page 3:
remember it, it {starts}→{has started} to hurt again
Page 4:
{I will call for} → {I’ll get} the doctor
his body to protect {}→{the} young
That he let {1}→{a} bolt
Clippy notes: single digit numbers look odd in text, stick to word versions. A/The is also a preferable substitute for “one”.
{I will save that for later}-{We can ignore that for now}
Page 5:
you {didn’t get any}→{haven’t got a} big job
Page 9:
we have an emergency call {}→{out}
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Cliffhanger number 1 …
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO (Insert Dark Vador meme)
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What I don’t understand is why no one comment about the Captain’s total lack of reaction towards teleportation/monsters/otherworlders even if it happened in front of his eyes.
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Because everyone here have read the novel, which explained his reaction and behave in detail.
There also a chapter in his POV.
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Well , I ,in fact , didn’t read the novel , but hey , we are so used to not mind the destruction of common sense on this site ( I mean to say : mile , kaoru ,… ) so I actually just didn’t notice getting someone APPEAR in front of me and TELEPORT me in another world as something a little bit out of “common sense” xD
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Could you explain it to me, since manga prob won’t do it? Or where I can read about it.
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grrrrr 11th for realease and another 1 week for raw and tl , ORZ
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I would love for you to contiue taru novel but I love mitsuha as well.
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Chan chan chan clifhanger . Novel i am comming for you
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Official English out now, you still continuing this? The novel will be lot different between web and LN version, but the manga I think have exactly same contents.
thanks
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Even thought i already read the novel but it´s continue being a Cliff to me.
11/01 + translation time T_T
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hey, been a while since i last commented( i still check your site regularly tho).
many thanks for the updates.
still waiting for you generous update for this novel.
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Okay. That was Epic.
-Ben Shapiro
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