Mitsuha Manga Chapter 30.2: The Princess Shrine Maiden’s Campaign (Part 2)
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Mitsuha Manga Chapter 30.2: The Princess Shrine Maiden’s Campaign (Part 2)
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imoutosite.com 
Thanks…
But her expression is not convincing enough…
By the way, official English is come out…
https://solpress.co/product/479/saving-80000-gold-in-another-world-for-my-retirement
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OH NO
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i feel these guys steal translations and just change parts
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lol, they labeled it as “Violent”.
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hmm.. soo far no major issues on translation after reading the whole thing
& thanks for the update this was very good! *thumbs up!*
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Thank you for posting given your schedule. Keep it up!
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suggestion:
page 2:
our enemies are 20000 strong, we are only 58 {people}->{peoples}
page 3:
it’s a {defend}->{defensive} mission
to protect the citizen of the capital
page 6:
whoever decline this {duty}->{mission} can leave in the meantime.
page 8:
it seems like everyone already {knows}->{know} the destination isn’t {the}->{on} earth.
however, it seems everyone {respects}->{respect} the client’s {private}->{privacy} and {doesn’t}->{don’t} ask anything about it…
continue for page 12 optional information
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page 12:
{optional}->{additional} information from the author
mercenary team wolf fang {owned}->{own} several vehicles
light armored {mobile}->{cars}
{jeep}->{jeeps} with {heavy machine guns loaded}->{heavy machine gun mounted}
{truck}->{trucks} with hood
a small mercenary team without {names}->{name}
which is why {tomorow}->{tomorrow} they may be hired by enemies
were not being called by {tac}->{that} name yet.
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“TAC” is in Alphabet
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Page 8: Everyone must be (knows, respects, doesn’t)
Like the quote”everyone knows that”
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also don’t change the people to peoples as it’s overkill the word people is already Plural it doesn’t need an addition S
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Yeah, somehow I remember seeing people without an addition S with plural mean before, and I unconciousness use only “people”
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people is right.
peoples would give it a completly different meaning.
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thank you for the chapter!
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Back from editing the old mile chapters
As a note I think I edit for clarity of language over more flowery language, so feel free to argue over my LN
Editing
words of gratitude from the {citizen}->{citizens}
EN: plural, there are my citizens with gratitude
who {}→{one sidedly} broke the treaty {one-side}->{}
page 3
protect the {citizen}→{citizens}
Localization
Page 2:
the mission {this time}→{as such}
suffers is the {citizen}→{civilian}
LN: citizens is everyone, civilians are the non-combatents
can {insist on their righteousnesses}→{claim to be in the right}
page 4
we are absolutely {}→{on the side of}
page 6
I will {leave this place for}→{be back in}
whoever {}→{wishes to} decline this mission can l{eave in the meantime}→{back out now}
page 8
they are really {pro}→{professional}
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Thank you very much.
Will fix it and reupload it now.
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Thanks for the chapter.
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why the cliff again, the agony…
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Thanks for the chapter! 🙂
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Then read the Light Novel!
(of course there are people that don’t like to read novels… But if you start out with a REALLYY good one, you might get addicted to them. cough koff ME ahem, cough)
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Read the Light novel if the cliffhanger is too much of an agony to you.
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I USED TO dis-like read novel (Born to late 2017), my imagination is quite low for the wall of text.
Until I read OSO manga and heard people chatting about the Novel “this and that”
And I came to krytykal to read it.
I GOT HOOKED and read 9 volumes non-stop back there.
And then after that I learned of NovelUpdate page.
I tried to read a lot of other novels there.
Until Feb 2018, I ran out of Novels to read, and daily/monthly update is way too long.
And it was when I tried to translate the novel myself even I DIDN’T KNOW any English outside the “chatting on the internet” in which people forgive mistakes/typos.
Thank to a lot of people help me fix my mistakes, I get somewhat better at English.
Looking back at my translation, I’m ashamed of A LOT OF silly mistakes back there.
(I still make mistakes even now though :P)
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Editing your old work is odd, you make a lot of low level mistakes, tense errors, incorrect predicates etc. but the high level sentence structure tends to be very good. I don’t know if that is MTL or what but it is odd, normally when I am editing my own stuff I frequently have to rewrite the entire sentence to make it work, with your stuff that doesn’t seem to happen.
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Although due to the differences in how I edit it may I don’t mess around with your stuff as much to get a proper feel of how to fix the more clunky sentences, especially since I am going for a “fix as much as possible as fast as possible” approach as opposed to polishing a chapter down to a mirror shine like I do with my own work.
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krytyk already don’t have mood to translate Only Sense Online.
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Just curious , if you are not english or american , why do you do english translation and not translation in your language ? You don’t have to respond if you don’t want to
( I myself am a Russian who lives in Belgium but read english scans and novel because the french translations are WAY WAY TOO LATE ^^)
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Well, it’s true that translating to my language (Vietnamese) is really easy.
But I PREFER TO TRANSLATE INTO English.
There is a wider ranger of English Readers than Vietnamese Readers.
There are a lot of Kanji that I can’t read or understand.
But Vietnamese can understand it if I read those “Kanji” like “Hanji/Chinese” as “Vietnamese”
For example:
“先” means “First” , “Before” , etc.
“生” means like “People”
“先生” is “Sensei” in Japanese, I must change it to Master or Teacher, etc.
But in Vietnamese, I just need to pronoun it (With google translate) as (Xiān shēng CN-ese/ Tiên Sinh VN-ese) and everyone will understand.
I don’t even need to change structure too.
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Don’t worry , you will get better very quickly . I myself was EXTREMELY bad at english at some point at school . But then when I learnt what I enough to read a little , I spent most of my time reading english manga , and now I even read novels . So for you who is even writing , it really won’t take long ^^ . And anyway , you still do a really great work and we can’t thank you enough for that
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Same for me with mile , I read the whole 232 chapter in 1-2 days xD
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Really! well, it was the same with me.
I used to read ONLY manga until I was playing around my brother’s kindle. I searched “manga” but a couple of light novels popped up.
After I finished reading the manga samples (I didn’t buy because it wasn’t my kindle), I went ahead and downloaded the LN samples only because I was bored.
I opened the sample.
I started reading it from the cover to find the pictures you usually see in LNs.
Then the first page came up!
I read it and was instantly hooked!
Luckily it was a well made book. Otherwise I would have backed out of it instantly. Since I couldn’t buy any books, I went online and searched if the internet had any. The first result was Readlightnovel.org. Of course it had to be a pirated site. I finished the most recent chapters, so I looked up more on the same site. I read a couple of series.
Then I came across a novel where the uploader forgot to take away the original TL’s self promotion. Being the curious person I was, I searched it up on Google-Sensei.
The TL also happened to say something about Novel Updates but I forgot what it was.
And that’s the story of how I got into Light/Web novels, and Novel Updates.(Also the Non-Pirated sites!)
When I read LN/WNs or manga and there is mention of an adaptation, I go and read(or watch!) the adaptation. Although I’m sure may people do that.
What I first read on the Kindle was Arifureta and In another world with my smartphone (sadly. It is basically just fanservice).
I don’t know what you think, but your English is pretty good! (At least better than my mom’s and she has lived here since a LONG time. At least 25 years!)
Most importantly, THANKS FOR TRANSLATING!! You are awesome!
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Now one of my biggest pet peeves is when I see anything pirated on the internet. ESPECIALLY when the original uploader specifically said to not do that.
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Reblogged this on Tio’s Blog.
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25 is so far away…
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Thank you for the update ~
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25 urgh, the waiting +- tl and scanlating, 28 maybe
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