Edits:
Page 1
this is +a+….
EN: missing article, given it is not a proper noun
-had- enchanted it the other day
page 3:
raising the {stage}→{strength} of the {magic enchant}→{enchantment}
about five thousand-s-
EN: thousands are never used with precise numbers
Localization
page 6:
Only the {magic chief}→{head magician}
good good! Thank you thank you!
LikeLike
Edits:
Page 1
this is +a+….
EN: missing article, given it is not a proper noun
-had- enchanted it the other day
page 3:
raising the {stage}→{strength} of the {magic enchant}→{enchantment}
about five thousand-s-
EN: thousands are never used with precise numbers
Localization
page 6:
Only the {magic chief}→{head magician}
LikeLiked by 1 person
nothing to add
LikeLike