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1. I wanna see how she get’s rid of the bandits haha

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   • Well, do you expect her charge in? It will be some *bang-bang-bang*, for she in Princess Shrine Maiden of Thunder xD

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2. gracias y 1 lugar

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3. Thanks for the chapter. Seems like its time to go guns blazing.

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4. Thanks for the chapter as always ^^

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5. nice pieces, thanks for the chapter
   as always easy to read

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6. Page 4
   mountains, +a+ river and facing the sea
   with +a+ small land
   there are a lot of {trouble}→{problems} {to}->{with} managing

   page 5:
   {these}-{this} land {are}-{is}
   land is singular, use is over are
   page 8:
   on {the}-{a} different side
   note: there is more than one other side so use a over the
   page 9
   {viva}-{via} scientific power
   page 15
   the empires troops -are- scattered when they retreated
   note here scatted is a verb not an adjective, so no copula
   for their {lost}-{loss}
   avoid {to fight}→{fighting}
   page 19
   {250 yen or 2.08 dollars}→{2USD}
   Keep the words down and just use the currency most of the audience is familiar with.

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   • Viva is in English (katakana) means like long live.

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     • Ah, then a better structure would be “Long live Science!”

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7. thanks for the chapter!

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8. Thanks for the chapter ^-^

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