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imoutosite.com 
Fai
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Fail.
Must be “Fia”
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But i want fai
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“Fai” is food in greek. Shironeko’s just hungry.
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Yeah i’m hungry for more translation
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Raw is up to chapter 6 only
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Not just Fia all ur translation
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Page 1
“I inherited THIS title” would sound better but it’s not incorrect to have the
“Even if I’m second to the right to succeed” would be better “even if I’m second in line to succeed” would be best
Wouldn’t instead of doesn’t, as he’s talking about the potential future so needs future tense
Page 2
“Well I was next to him” would sound/flow better then “we’ll I was next to the commander” since it’s already known who he’s talking about
“you are my only king” would sound better unless I’m misunderstanding what’s being said
Page 4
The “is” is in the wrong place Should be “is she really”
Page 5
The “first” is unneeded unless you were to say “in the first place” (kinda a phrase not sure exactly what to describe it as) instead
Should be “you’ll” or “you will” and then “ruin” instead of “ruined” unless he’s talking about something that already happened then there needs to be something added at the end of the sentence like “because of stuff like this”
“Don’t” instead of do would be better in the last speech bubble
Page 6
The “just” is unneeded here given the context
It’s not wrong but you could have, “she’s” instead of “she is” to shorten it
“Her marriage” instead of “the marriage” is more accurate given “with you”
I would add a “instead” after “your brother”
Page 7
A “it” is needed between “pointed” and “out”
A “and” is needed between “party” and”unconsciously” and then it should be “adjusts” not “adjust”
“There being” should be inserted between “of” and “anything”
Page 9
“I was wondering” would be better then “I wondered” here
Page 12
You should add “she” before “understand” and change “understand” to “understands”
A “can” should be inserted between “and” and “quantify”
Page 19
“a” instead of “the” would be better
Since the monster has been slain, they are now talking in past tense so it should be “that 20 of us struggled with” so remove the “are” and change “struggling” to “struggled”
Page 20
You should add a “down” after cut since he killed it, without the “down” it sounds like he just hurt it
You should either remove the “such” OR the “like that” it doesn’t make sense to have both
Page 23
It’s not wrong but you could change “do not” to “don’t” to shorten it
Should be “The Ruud family are inherently strong” instead of “The Ruud family are originally strong”
You should change “teaching” to “teachings” and then add “state” between “teachings” and “that”
Page 26
The “but” is unneeded
Having there’s” instead of “There is” would be better
Page 28
There’s a typo should be “Roger” rather the “Roget”
Page 30
Add a “in” between “that” and “they”
The “into” is unneeded
Page 31
I’m a little unclear on what’s being said here, If “allergy” is caused by the medicine then it’s a side effect and it should be “like allergies” or “such as allergies” instead of “and allergies” if the medicine has effects similar to allergies then it should be “similar to allergies” OR “reminiscent of allergies”
Page 33
You should insert a “rather” between “body” and “than”
Should be “cutting” not not “cut”
You should insert a “her” between “carry” and “all”
Page 38
The speech bubble with only “and” in it is unneeded but not incorrect (what I mean is the “and” is unneeded so a bubble with only it is also unneeded)
Should be “were” instead of “are”
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I can’t tell if I put the above as a reply accidentally, or if it’s a normal post , if I did I’m sorry
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“I inherited THIS title” is wrong.
Cyril become Captain only for a few years. But he inherited the Duke title from his father 10 years ago and became a Duke when he about 10 years old.
He just didn’t care about that title. He came to the capital to become a knight, then a leader.
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Page 7: Excuse me
“There being” should be inserted between “of” and “anything”
=> “of there being anything”?
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“Were” or “Are” still look weird.
I think I should use “hey”
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Page 1 oh that was unclear in that case, “a title” would make more sense as he says what the title is later in the sentence, “the title” would only really make sense if he’s referring to being captain or after he’s said what the title is.
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Yeah that’s right “I’ve never heard of there being anything, you don’t understand in behaviour analysis” in retrospect well not being wrong this does sound a little awkward “of there being something” might be better
Page 38 (you accidentally put 33 I think? Unless you mean a different page?)
I don’t see how “hey” would make any sense it would then be saying “so why hey we called here” which is wrong on multiple levels, if you you think it should be “hey why were we brought here” that also wouldn’t make sense unless she was asking that to someone but these are her thought so “hey” doesn’t make sense here
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I thought you mean “And” is unneeded so I changed it to “hey”
So (“were” replaced “are”) means for the second bubble?
I thought you mean to replace the “And”
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Ah I see, yes I did mean that the “and” is unneeded
but “were” instead of “are” is referring to the second bubble, sorry I wasn’t clear.
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“Fia”
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Bakaneko failed lmao
thank you for the udpdate~
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update*
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Too slow.
I even failed him to stall time for you.
He already fixed it so he WON by Mile.
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No Shironeko should always win. Go Shironeko.
Besides I look forward how she tries to get out of this situation. Maybe using the dragon telling her as an excuse? But would that work … anyway thx for the chapter, I like this manga already.
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Something went screwy on page 5. might want to check that.
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оо
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Thanks for Fia ,thanks for this chapter…I said it
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U done goof !
Thanks for the great worn ^^
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Thank you for your hard work everyone! This is so good.
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It should be called a “fial” whenever she messes up, lol.
I’m enjoying this alot more than I thought I would.
Thanks for the chapter!
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Fission mailed.. aha.. 😞
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Its a litlle late but” Fia” i was too busy
Thanksss
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